Here is what I wrote-
As I flew on the plane,
I felt very plain.
The ground was not in sight,
so I sat tight.
As the ball whacked,
it hit the ground smack.
The bat was swinging into the air,
I hope that they play fair!
The hole was closer to the ball,
then the ball fell.
I then asked a player,
then I saw the mayor.
All eyes were looking at me
then I saw a cute, fuzzy bee.
My trip home was really fun
I was relieved because my job was done!
I felt very plain.
The ground was not in sight,
so I sat tight.
As the ball whacked,
it hit the ground smack.
The bat was swinging into the air,
I hope that they play fair!
The hole was closer to the ball,
then the ball fell.
I then asked a player,
then I saw the mayor.
All eyes were looking at me
then I saw a cute, fuzzy bee.
My trip home was really fun
I was relieved because my job was done!
I hope that you liked it!
Great poem Lauren. If you were reporting on the sport, how would you be feeling as a spectator/reporter?
ReplyDeleteGreat poem that is so cool you are so good at making up poem sound like you were there.
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