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Thursday, 18 August 2016

Before and After Post

We have been writing a post about one of our older posts. I choose my blog post to reflect on "Just Desserts." I had to make it better my following a blog rubric. Here it is-


This is the difference I have made-

Its really hard to read, even when you are in the doc...


I then took all the advise and I changed my blog post.
Here is the link to it- Just Desserts Please comment on it!

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