The Fanta-stick Stick

In writing, we have been learning about persuasive writing. So now we are trying to get people to buy a stick. It may be hard to sell but we want to see how good we are at using persuasive words. Mrs McGuinniety choose this because she got inspired by a school who sold a rubber band for about $20. We aren't going to really sell it but we are going to pretend that we are selling it. There are puns to make it interesting.

Here is my writing-

Have you wanted to be the envy of your friends? Or are you just looking for that perfect touch of colour to your house? Maybe you need this one chance to show who you really are, the real you. Then I bring you, the Fanta-stick Buddy! This one-in-a kind merchandise will be the purchase of your life! This piece of wood will show everyone that you love nature with one easy touch, that you are full of imagination and it’s the perfect gift for Christmas.

Do you have a small garden but really want to express yourself with nature? Are you not getting enough sunlight at Winter? Well, I have the solution that suits just about everyone. Buy the Fanta-stick Buddy! This amazing stick will save you space in your garden which means more sunlight and warmth for the Winter. Also, having a tree can annoy neighbours or can lead to falling injuries. You don’t what that to happen! Another benefit of having the Fanta-stick Buddy is that it saves you time, money and water. Having a tree can be a real hassle, with all the watering, trimming and chopping you have to do. You can avoid all of this if you just get the amazing one-in-a kind stick!

Are you tired of people telling you to do only what you are supposed to? Hate obeying the boring rules? Well it is time to show yourself to everyone around you! A great benefit of having a stick is that  you can show everyone your imagination. No need to obey the old school rules in the book, time to use your brain and not your head! If you want the latest toy barbie, you can create it yourself! You want an airplane toy? Then modify this amazing stick and make your dreams come true! Or do you have any annoying siblings? Then create the ultimate weapon to keep them away. With this stick, you control it, show who’s the boss because this stick will stick by your side as you take over the world with imagination!

Tick, tock, tick, tock. That was the sound of your clock ticking away. With every passing moment, time is getting shorter. You’re wasting time thinking of the perfect Christmas gift. But look no further, the simple solution is right here. Buy the one and only perfect merchandise gift, the Fanta-stick Stick! It is all that you can wish for. No need to buy a million dollar toy that disappears with the click of a finger. Just get the amazing, dazzling stick-tastick stick. It’s the perfect time-saving gift for kids, pets and old grandma! It’s the best gift for everyone! Even your snowman!

Overall, this 100% pla-stick free piece of wood will show everyone that you love nature, your imagination is endless and it's the perfect gift with Christmas coming! So get down on your knees and beg your family to buy this perfect merchandise gift or grab that money saved for your new tv and spend it right now! Buy it now, don’t delay!